Nabila Khairunnisa (1888203063) Outline
Topic : Hoax
Title :
Colonization of the Modern Era.
TS : How
Students against the hoax
Body Idea 1 :
Students need to know the Information of the News
Body Idea
2 : Try to drill a lot the information of the news
Body Idea 3 :
Try to analyse the news
Conclusion : We
can distinguish between the true news and hoax.
Colonization
of the Modern Era
Nowadays
technology has been using by everyone in the world. The faster technology is
progressing, the faster news is spreading. News is same as the knowledge, we
can get it from anywhere and from anyone. But the bigger promblems is, does the
news is true or false? due to that problem, we know that not everyone in this
country can analyse the true of the news. As a students, we should to know how
students against the hoax. The data were gotten from observation, document
analysis and test. The essay test was the instrument used to assess the
students’ critical thinking which later adopted the model of the Holistic
Critical Thinking Scoring Rubric (HCTSR). The result of the study showed that
using of hoax news significantly improve the students’ critical thinking
followed by the development of interpretation, analysis and identification
ability. The number students posed strong thinking increased from 6.45% to
72,2%
When you get the
new news from other people or from othe source. What should people do? most of
us probably believe the news at the first. But, for a students we should to
know the news first. What exactly that news talking about. Don't be easy
to trusting the news before you know about the news. Common Sense, a media that supports the education of children and parents conducted a survey of 853 children aged 10-18 years in the United States in early 2017. From a survey of 853 children, 44 percent said they could adjust between hoax or not. However, 31 percent still doubt the truth of the news that they have shared with others.
After we know
the news. Try to drill a lot information about that news. Maybe from the
several people, several sourches, several point of view, and so on. Why we need
to do that? because It will improve our knowledge about that news. So that we
will more understand about the news.
The last step
after you know the news and drill a lot the information about it, we should to
able to analyse the news based on our data and our informations. To analyse the
news maybe we can discuss with other or with our friends. After all, we know
that the news is true or just hoax.
So guys, being a
people which have more education than other. We can distinguish between the
true news and hoax. We also can reduce the spread of hoax.
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BalasHapusHello kak bel..
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